There was a sudden disturbance and the family turned around in surprise. The curtain flung open and the cat jumped up in shock. Mr Smith assumed that there was about to be a burglary and he told the children to hide. Mrs Smith yelled at him and told him his thought was absurd! The day before the window was broken during the family cricket match of wild batting. Now, the wind was blowing through a big hole. There was a quitet murmur from the children and the cat gave a sheepish meow! Even the furniture in the room seemed to sigh in relief! By Jenna Kimber.
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Dark Orange: action verb and spelling word
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What a descriptive story! I love all the action verbs you used! Well done!
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