A Crack Window
One early morning, my mum and I were talking about humorous things. Until my mum and I said it would be a precious day today. Suddenly, there was a mysterious sound! We looked around and then my mum shouted out for me. Then we both started screaming as we both figured out there was a big crack on our glass window.
We were both very nervous and called my dad. My dad then called our land agent and she said she would come and look at it. We thought that the previous constructions beneath might have caused the crack. Then the door bell rang, it was the land agent who was anxious and curious to see the big crack on the glass window.
The next day, it was rainy and thundery. I was having a marvellous time with a friend until we heard a big BANG! And guess what...
TO BE CONTINUED
By Angelica Slater
21/03/2010
Great cliffhanger! Well done for using paragraphs too!
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