Today I got really nervous, about going to a new school. Today April 30th but then I got even more nervous, since mom said I was going to the new school TODAY!!! That is what troubles me but my little brother was really anxious about this new school and all. Then he said something that no one likes hearing:
"I'm the best in the world!" Mom was really mad with him. (His name is Kevin by the way.) Kevin then said that he is the only one who was curious about the school. That's why he's the best. Mom then said:
"I don't care if you are curious or not, you are not the best, the best person is still very mysterius. Kevin then blamed on me he said that lilly said to do it she she said she would feed me to the carnivorous lions if I didn't do it. Mom asked me if that was true, and I denied then Kevin said...
Well done! Well done for trying to use colons, you can just use a comma here though. Good work!
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