Oh! I finally arrived to my bus stop and successfully made it through the heavy traffic. The ground was beautifully covered with white powdery thick snow, and I can feel the cold wind blowing on my face. I slowly walked to my home as well as I gradually pulled my bag on the ground. Snowflakes started to drop again and some particularly landed on the tip of my nose. Besides , when I looked up the sky it was getting dark, so I thought it would probably dump snow again. I suddenly got home and quickly opened the door and quietly walk in and run to give my mum a hug.
By Angelica Slater
Well done Angelica, you did a good job of including different connectives!
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