Sunday, 21 February 2010

My Trip (Mini Story)

A few days ago, I went on a short trip with my parents. Although, it was a long ride from my school to the airport, we managed to have enough time to catch the plane. In the plane, there were a lot of foreign visitors traveling with us and besides, one of them was my neighbour.I thought most of them were going to their favourite destination because they were carrying some of their essential need like maps, books and sun hats and many more.

It was roughed throughout the flight , but I still enjoyed listening music from my i-touch while reading my book that I brought. Suddenly, there was an announcement from the captain that we were about to land, however, it might be delayed for a while due to traffic condition at the tarmac. Finally, we landed and all of us were rushing to get off the plane as well as collecting our luggage.


By:

Angelica Slater
February 21, 2010 (Sunday)

3 comments:

  1. Good openers, and lots of differnt connectives!
    Well done. Check your sentences to make sure they make sense.

    Mrs Wilcox

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