Today is Tuesday the 9th of March one horrible thing is Tuesday is usually ordinary, but today is different. I normally have home work since I work in College, but my kind teacher made a stop to that!
"It is the one day that I will not give home work since you all have brought in every single piece of home work, so far well done", explained every one loved the idea, but then she checked through the homework tray one more time to see the home work but, a boy called Cory Guard was guilty so at the end of school Cory wore a disguise to make sure everyone wouldn't stick their tongue out
"HOORAY! HOORAY! I SURVIVED MY HOMEWORK!" Sang Cory!
"who sang that?" asked Mr Hang everyone started to listen to him they went around biscuit school soon a whistle blew
"I saw Cory blow the whistle he is guilty! " I called
"what is next?" asked Mr Hang.
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Well done Abby, good speech and speech marks!Don't forget your punctuation, and check where you have put commas in.
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