The Potion of Obedience

Suddenly, the door sprang open and the mischievious niece ran out; Winnie and I followed her. "Wait, it's not poison; it's just a bottle of potion to make you into a nice person!" I yelled loudly. "I don't care! Why do you want to experiment the potion on me?" the niece yelled back. "It is because you are mischievious! You are very different, in a bad way," Winnie said.

Winnie and I were very tired; we collapsed on the ground. "Where are we?" I asked curiously. "MOVE! There's a truck coming this way," Winnie shouted in my ear. As I jumped out of the truck's way, I saw the niece's beady eyes hiding behind a tree. I grabbed her and tied her on the tree. When I poured the potion into her mouth, she suddenly turned into an obidient monkey.

Scared of what had just happened, we called 999 and took the niece to the doctors. The doctor said, "are you crazy? why did you turn her into a moneky?" "I didn't mean to, I just wanted to help her become a better person." "Well, I suppose we may have put in some inappropriate ingredients." We put in two apples, three bananas, one spider and some chocolate into the potion. The doctor and I had an argument about the potion for about an hour. The doctor finally gave the antidote to the niece and she turned back to her mischievious self again.

By Jamie Kim