The Potion of Obedience

Suddenly, the door sprang open and the mischievious niece ran out; Winnie and I followed her. "Wait, it's not poison; it's just a bottle of potion to make you into a nice person!" I yelled loudly. "I don't care! Why do you want to experiment the potion on me?" the niece yelled back. "It is because you are mischievious! You are very different, in a bad way," Winnie said.

Winnie and I were very tired; we collapsed on the ground. "Where are we?" I asked curiously. "MOVE! There's a truck coming this way," Winnie shouted in my ear. As I jumped out of the truck's way, I saw the niece's beady eyes hiding behind a tree. I grabbed her and tied her on the tree. When I poured the potion into her mouth, she suddenly turned into an obidient monkey.

Scared of what had just happened, we called 999 and took the niece to the doctors. The doctor said, "are you crazy? why did you turn her into a moneky?" "I didn't mean to, I just wanted to help her become a better person." "Well, I suppose we may have put in some inappropriate ingredients." We put in two apples, three bananas, one spider and some chocolate into the potion. The doctor and I had an argument about the potion for about an hour. The doctor finally gave the antidote to the niece and she turned back to her mischievious self again.

By Jamie Kim

A Fun Weekend

This weekend I went to stay at my friend’s house for a sleep over. It was a very different experience because we went to visit the military base to see a movie and watch a baseball game. Even though I wasn’t feeling well, I was persistent because I was filled with excitement.

We were very patient watching the advertisement before the magnificent movie commenced.

After the movie was finished we proceeded to watch a baseball game which was a different type of accompaniment event to what I am used to.

After that we all went home to my friend’s house and her mum told us, we have to write our short story and make some different sentences in our stories on what we had done during the day.

By Angelica Slater

The Advertisement

On television today, I watched an advertisement about how to make a trail mix. It was a magnificent recipe, using delicious and different ingredients. Very experienced movie-makers made the advertisement. But I heard that before they made the ad, they had to experiment with the trail mix. They were very intelligent and had a sufficient mix of flavors in the recipe. After seeing the ad, I raced into the kitchen and started mixing, pouring, pounding and then I ate my trail mix.

By Wiley Bahr

Swimming On Sunday

Today I went swimming in the pool at the British Embassy and played with Gabby and Rebecca , my friends, who live there. There was a lot of excitement as we kept on falling of our magificent new, rubber rings that we bought earlier this morning. I also did an independent activity in the water. I did two laps of each of these different strokes butterfly, backstroke, breststroke and freestyle. We did lots of jumping and diving in the deep end of the pool and had lots of fun. However, at the end me and my dad an argument because I did not want to get out of the swimming pool although I was tired and cold.

By Rebecca
[This is a true story]

Friends Forever

Suddenly there was a magnificent squeal as the animals captured the aboriginals. As soon as they grabbed them, one of the animals wailed "Help us!" The aboriginals then saw that that there was a small baby dingo lying on the floor underneath the mantelpiece. The persistent animals begged for help and the obedient aboriginals agreed to the animals pleading on the floor. The experienced aboriginals slowly pushed up the mantelpiece. Soon enough the little dingo was released and thanking his new friends as they had just saved his life.

The animals were relieved because the small baby dingo was safe. Wallambimbi made an announcement, "Animals and aboriginals shall re unite! We should be friends and help each other survive harsh living in the outback." The animal parliament leader exclaimed "Great idea, lets discuss this matter over a sufficient feast!"

The good life of animals and humans continued and there was great peace on earth.

By Ben

The Mischievious Niece

I was walking to my friend Winnie's house. She is 15 years old and has an older sister named Rebecca. Rebecca got married and had a daughter named Sarah. As I got closer to her house, I heard a loud 'BOOM' sound coming from her house. I thought there was an explosion, but I was wrong. It was Winnie's niece Sarah making popcorn. I couldn't believe that making popcorn would make such loud sounds. Suddenly, I heard a chicken sound coming from her house. I ran into her house to find that Winnie's pet hamster had been changed into a chicken. Sarah had put some chemicals inside the popcorn machine and some of it had splashed onto the pet hamster. The chicken was now making screaming sounds because he was stuck in the small hamster's cage.

I thought that a chicken inside a hamster's cage was very funny. Then, Sarah brought out a big box full of glass bottles. She then smashed them into pieces. When Winnie's mum came in, Sarah blamed me and said, "this big loser broke the glass bottles." She said it very sarcastically. "Yeah, right!" I replied.

Next, the mischievious niece made hot boiling soup full of potatoes. Instead of putting the spices in the soup, she sprinkled them on me and Winnie. "What are you doing?" we asked suspiciously. She didn't answer, but kept putting pieces of vegetables on us and told us to be quiet. She wanted to put us in her soup. "HELP!" I screamed loudly and tried to run. Suddenly, Winnie's mum and Sarah's mum came into the kitchen and spanked all of us on our bottoms for no reason. When I went back to my house, I received a telephone call from Winnie. She wanted me to go back to her house to help her to clear up.

By Jamie Kim

What my Mum's Niece did

One early morning, my mum’s niece finally arrived with her blossom bear and drink bottle. She then saw me and hugged me really tight. I almost believed that I was like a big sister because of her affection towards me.

I told her we were able to read books, paint a sword and a shield. She then gasped and said “ You did all this for me?”, and I nodded. I told her we could play fight with them and do what ever we want to do with them but we have to pretend to be fierce with them. She started jumping up and down like crazy because she was so excited that she accidently put the a piece of the sword through the ceiling!!!

My mum got so mad that she sent her in the room by herself until she left to go back home. I missed her so much that I rang her on the phone every single day after that until the next weekend.

BY ANGELICA SLATER

They ran and ran until they found another door. They opened the door and inside it was piercingly stinky...

The Bathroom!! All the tribe members were full of grief because George had only done a brief flush. Suddenly there was a shriek and they looked out. When they left the bathroom they saw a mantlepiece on the floor. After a while the aboriginals found that there were pieces of the mantlepiece on the floor and that it had fallen from the ceiling.

By Ben

The Fake Piercing Sound

One day a loud piercing sound came from the living room. After checking the living room, I was relieved that nothing happened to the fragile picture cubes that were sitting on the mantelpiece. But then the piercing sound started again. It sounded like a person screaming at me. The piercing voice shrieked, "This mantelpiece is a magic mantelpiece." Then I said, "Wow, my mantelpiece is magic!" I thought to myself, "maybe the voice is deceitful." At last I thought of another thing, maybe my brother is standing right behind me. When I turned around, I discovered my brother. I called up to the ceiling so my mom would come down and put my brother in a time out. Due to his time out, he cried so hard that he needed a handkerchief. Good grief!

By Wiley Bahr, Y3W

The relieve on the ceiling

May 18th 2010

Today the ceiling fell down, and broke the mantel piece. I buried my diary to protect it. We had to relieve the ceiling, the mantel piece, many books and the glass shield but I had a lot of grief on the last one, because my pet cat who cost a lot of money died! Fortunately my mom said she had enough money to relieve Marley, the cat who I was talking about!!! I was thrilled I was so happy tears rolled down my eyes, so my mom had to give me a handkerchief.
Well I havn't told you I have a little sister! Well she gets into a lot of mischief like my sister was doing alot of besige on the broken mantle piece she didn't even let people fix it!

Uh Oh souded like the roof is falling apart again I'd better go save my things including the tabby I named Marley!

Goodbye!

By Abby



Lillys house click here

confusion in a mission

Friday 30th April 2010

Today my mum was on a MISSION. I'm sure she struggled because here were on of the codes: Ha Ha You Can't Catch Me Poop Poop Agent From The Evil Polar Bear but something was also bugging me during the DIVISION test. Some sort of discussion or something. My Mom's mission was to find a baddy in the ARIZONA DESERT, and that was not a cool OCCASION, my mom was full of confusion during the mission.

Oh that's dad with dinner see ya!

By Abby

Going to Arizona

“Finally it’s the Summer Holidays!” yelled Sally after she got of the bus, “I cannot wait until we go to… Ariz, Arizona” Sally said in an offended tone.

“ Yes Sally I think you are finally saying the correct name this time” sighed Sally’s Mum.

“ Yippee I’ve been practicing saying that name a million times, now I’m getting used to saying it”

Suddenly, a familiar face appeared into my vision. It was Sally’s best friend Leslie. Sally ran up to Leslie and said “ I’m going to Arizona tomorrow, isn’t that so amazing! “

“ Hey! I thought I was going to Arizona,“

“ You are? “

“ Yep “

“ AHHHH! “

Then they had a very long discussion. The next day they found each other together the whole day. They had permission to travel together and they went on the same flight, same car and they even stayed in the same room. But when all the fun was over they were both sad but still had fun at school.

BY ANGELICA SLATER

The Big Mission

A scientist had the profession of travelling on a super difficult mission. He and his boss each had a wristwatch with a television and a camera. They could see and communicate with each other. The scientist had super good vision. The scientist had to fly to the Arizona desert however, his flight was delayed.

Red = spelling word

Blue = wow word

By Wiley Bahr

Such confusion. A quiet song ahead. Why would someone or something be singing these unusual songs?

Quickly Wallambimbi made a decision (which was his profession) to give Wicken permission to have a look at what was further ahead singing silly songs. When they got to a different room they found the little animal thieves in seats singing in a language that the Aboriginals cold not understand. They realized it must be a special occasion. Soon enough one of them saw Wicken and he quickly ran off. They heard animals saying" It must be an invasion. "Finally they saw more animals chasing after them!

By Ben

The Egypt Tour (Part 2)

After the singing performance by Tutankamen, I clapped loudly. To show his appreciation, he bowed to the left, to the right, to the front and then to the back. "Stop!" I shouted. "I'm getting dizzy with all these bowing. "What shall we do next? Shall we go see my friend Cleopatra?" Tutankamen asked.

"I'd like that, but is she buried in this pyramid as well? I asked myself. Tutankamen overheard me and replied, "She is right next door! Let me tell you a secret. When you came into my tomb, I rose from the dead. So, when you go into Cleopatra's tomb, you shall have the power to raise her from the dead. Isn't that wonderful?" "Yes it is," I agreed.

We crept slowly to the next room without making a single sound. Before we could enter the tomb, we had to get permission from the tomb-keeper who was standing infront of the door. There was a long discussion between Tutankamen and the tomb-keeper. When he finally let us in, we noticed that several scientists were already inside taking pictures. They were from Arizona. They said that they were in Egypt to study the desert. I wanted to join their mission. We looked all around the tomb, but we could not find Cleopatra anywhere.

By Jamie Kim

Mystery

CCCCCCCCCCCCCCrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!The door opened as I stepped into the quiet ,mysterious, crypt ,a cool breeze blew throgh the doors and I stood there as silent as a mouse. Pieces of crystal were scattered everywere on the creaky wooden floor. This chamber in a pyramid in Egypt was very scary. But suddenly all of the mice and rats started to scamper away. Something was coming, I could feel it. However, what it was still remains a mystery. Perhaps you could find out for me, if you ever visit!

By Rebecca Wood