Monday 16th November 2009
Housework Again!
It was a Sunny Saturday afternoon when Polly secretly turned off the vacuum cleaner as she was helping her mum with the cleaning. She was annoyed because she had to help her and didn’t see why it was necessary for her to do the work. She decided that it would be much more fun to watch TV and not do the housework. So she put on her favorite channel and discovered there was a program on about an annoyed flight passenger in France. Next she had another brilliant idea, she could go and play with mum’s collection of best ornaments. So she hurried of to the shelf were she kept them. First she pulled out a little ornament shaped like a ladybird. It had a hole in the top she said “this is lovely for some gumi-bears!” and she merrily skipped into the kitchen to find some gumi-bears. Unfortunately mum was cleaning the kitchen floor! “Oh no!” muttered Polly “AND WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?” shrieked mum. In Polly’s surprise she dropped the ornament! “errrr………” said Polly “it was an accident!” She burst out “OK” said mum and successfully glued it back together again. After that Polly went to play with Molly her pet Guinea-Pig, she called her Molly because it rhymes with Polly. Playing with Molly always made her feel better.
By Rebecca.
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I feel the same way about housework! Great use of your spelling words and connectives. There are a few commas you can add in your writing. Where do you think they should go? Have a go editing! :-)
ReplyDeleteWell done!
love the story Rebecca I really liked the program that Polly watched
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't like to do work after my mum as well!
best story I've ever seen!
love Abby xxx